Enmity

[Cyferz]

I have been so dark so long
how could I not be the Light of the World?
I am no 'good' man.
"Light of the World" implying a deity? Then refer to self as a man. Confused.

I have so much
how could I not be the poorest of them all?
I see what you're trying to do with duality but still no sign of a premise

numismatists value coins they can not find
Doesn't really help if I have to google a word mid-read

prisoners value cigarettes they can not smoke
What do you value?
Enmity-Gives definition to everything.
It agrees with nothing.
The last two lines kind of make the rest of it make sense...only barely. This concept should appear at the beginning. Your dramatic ending isnt worth the confusion it causes


-ZM