Enmity
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(06-04-2014, 07:02 AM)zmeansy Wrote:  I have been so dark so long
how could I not be the Light of the World?
I am no 'good' man.
I have so much
how could I not be the poorest of them all?
numismatists value coins they can not find
prisoners value cigarettes they can not smoke
What do you value?
Enmity-Gives definition to everything.
It agrees with nothing.


-ZM
I like how you capture the problems of the modern world; the questions of introspection, the struggle to find ourselves and the meaning of what is real in a world that sometimes does not make sense.
"I have so much" breaks up the poem in a way which I am not sure reads very well but what I like is that it stops you to let the words sink in.
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Enmity - by zmeansy - 06-04-2014, 07:02 AM
RE: Enmity - by rowens - 06-04-2014, 07:49 AM
RE: Enmity - by casper - 06-05-2014, 08:30 AM
RE: Enmity - by Cyferz - 06-08-2014, 01:55 PM



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