06-04-2014, 11:53 PM
I liked this. I'm not sure if the line "Objects in mirror are farther than they appear" is a poetic cliche, but I really liked it and found as though it conveyed everything you were trying to get across here. The life you once knew is still visible and you can almost touch it, but it gets farther away everyday as you continue down the road of life. Really pretty line, really nice poem.
I write what I see. Write to make it right, don't like where I be. I'd like to make it like the sights on TV. Quite the great life, so nice and easy.