06-04-2014, 07:49 AM
You have a decent theme, the two lines that don't agree with the rest are all right. It isn't the best writing or the most interesting poem. But it could work beside some other poems or writings you might have.
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Enmity - by zmeansy - 06-04-2014, 07:02 AM
RE: Enmity - by rowens - 06-04-2014, 07:49 AM
RE: Enmity - by casper - 06-05-2014, 08:30 AM
RE: Enmity - by Cyferz - 06-08-2014, 01:55 PM
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