An Island -edited

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An Island



An island in the sea of life,
changing with every tide, I think "different" fits better here than the next line, or maybe another way to say the same would be good
my borders different daily. I would suggest "changes/changing daily"
The ocean as it rides
away with what was me
brings back a gift as well.
This ocean, how it encircles
I’m subject to the swell.
Though pieces of me drift away, Very good flow/rhytm in text till this point
new parts come to reside
and I am different daily… I think it sounds a little wierd still
ebbs and flows the tide.

overall good poem