Female Exploitation…a tale for today(edit 0.00002, blake,brownlie)

[ChristopherSea]

This was a good poem, but on this line:

I just get bored, so up the anti.

You probably meant to go with the word "ante"

Bloody good catch! Hoist on my own petard.
Thanks,
credited,
tectak

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I like this. It tells the tale of a feminist cam girl correct? Or is it just a woman who gets a lot of unsolicited explicit texts and videos?

Each stanza talks about a different way in which men try to exploit women and the misconceptions many men openly express. I think that's pretty cool. I like the frank language and how you don't try to pull any punches. The subject matters you are talking about are quite explicit, so I think it is perfect that the narrator is extremely blunt.

There were only a few things I thought could be changed. The Red Ferrari is referring to a vagina, which Prince has already very famously done. It works alright since you talk about a Porsche, but it could probably be made stronger with another metaphor. I also would reconsider the final line, after viewing the film Teeth the thought of vagina dentata makes me want to crawl into a hole and hide in fear.

Just my opinions on the changes. I really liked what you wrote. Keep it up!

Correct, Jimmy.
My ignorance of Prince's allusions is complete...the red Ferrari meant a red Ferrari
She's an uncomplicated girl!
Best,
tectak

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No thanks, I prefer mine without the teeth!

Bide your time,Chris.Sans eyes, sans teeth...
Best,
tectak

Ha, ha... Hey Jimmy, you are referring to Prince's 'little red corvette' in that vagina reference. Tom calls them the old gray Bentley.

By the way Tom, I agree with your thesis that prostitutes and porn stars exploit men and I am all for it.