06-02-2014, 04:45 AM
Loretta,
Change the title, it does not accurately speak to the poem. It seems to talk about being in prison, throws the whole poem off.
Dale
Change the title, it does not accurately speak to the poem. It seems to talk about being in prison, throws the whole poem off.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

