Solitary
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Loretta,

Change the title, it does not accurately speak to the poem. It seems to talk about being in prison, throws the whole poem off.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Solitary - by LorettaYoung - 06-02-2014, 12:37 AM
RE: Soltiary Confines - by Isis - 06-02-2014, 02:55 AM
RE: Soltiary Confines - by LorettaYoung - 06-02-2014, 03:15 AM
RE: Soltiary Confines - by Erthona - 06-02-2014, 04:45 AM
RE: Free in Solitary - by LorettaYoung - 06-09-2014, 02:21 AM
RE: Soltiary Confines - by LorettaYoung - 06-02-2014, 05:06 AM
RE: Free in Soltiary - by Tiger the Lion - 06-06-2014, 11:36 AM
RE: Free in Soltiary - by LorettaYoung - 06-06-2014, 11:59 AM
RE: Free in Solitary - by LorettaYoung - 06-13-2014, 06:42 AM
RE: Free in Soltiary - by QDeathstar - 06-06-2014, 12:04 PM
RE: Free in Soltiary - by LorettaYoung - 06-06-2014, 12:58 PM
RE: Free in Soltiary - by LorettaYoung - 06-06-2014, 12:09 PM
RE: Free in Soltiary - by QDeathstar - 06-06-2014, 12:33 PM
RE: Free in Soltiary - by kmatrixg - 06-06-2014, 05:40 PM
RE: Free in Soltiary - by LorettaYoung - 06-06-2014, 09:20 PM
RE: Free in Solitary - by Joey Automata - 06-11-2014, 10:46 AM
RE: Free in Solitary - by LorettaYoung - 06-11-2014, 11:06 AM
RE: Free in Solitary - by nb - 06-12-2014, 08:45 PM
RE: Free in Solitary - by theswelter - 06-17-2014, 09:40 PM
RE: Free in Solitary - by LorettaYoung - 06-18-2014, 12:16 AM



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