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The Hour of the Wolf

just mercedes
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#57

06-01-2014, 11:05 AM

Only change I can suggest is -
tick
tock
ticks

depth, hell and despair - all abstract concepts

Wolves' claws don't pierce - they rub, grind against

abrade
bark
corrode
damage

erode
excoriate
gall
grate

graze
hurt
impair
inflame

irritate
peel
ruffle
scrape

scratch
skin
wear

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The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-19-2014, 01:13 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by rowens - 05-19-2014, 05:08 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by rowens - 05-19-2014, 06:44 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by rowens - 05-19-2014, 09:18 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by billy - 05-19-2014, 09:54 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by Todd - 05-19-2014, 11:19 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by nb - 05-19-2014, 09:34 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by rowens - 05-20-2014, 10:16 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-20-2014, 10:28 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by rowens - 05-21-2014, 06:43 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by rowens - 05-21-2014, 08:34 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-22-2014, 03:04 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by rowens - 05-22-2014, 02:38 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by rowens - 05-22-2014, 03:27 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-22-2014, 04:38 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-23-2014, 08:52 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by rowens - 05-23-2014, 09:32 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by Todd - 05-23-2014, 09:46 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-23-2014, 10:20 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by Todd - 05-23-2014, 10:29 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by Todd - 05-23-2014, 11:26 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-23-2014, 10:42 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by Todd - 05-23-2014, 11:12 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-23-2014, 11:51 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-25-2014, 04:59 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by Todd - 05-25-2014, 05:53 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-25-2014, 06:15 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by QDeathstar - 05-25-2014, 12:18 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-25-2014, 01:01 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by Todd - 05-25-2014, 08:51 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-25-2014, 10:42 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by QDeathstar - 05-26-2014, 12:33 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by tectak - 05-26-2014, 12:50 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-26-2014, 07:53 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by tectak - 05-28-2014, 02:55 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by tectak - 05-28-2014, 10:43 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-28-2014, 11:43 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-29-2014, 02:25 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by abu nuwas - 05-29-2014, 06:19 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-29-2014, 06:44 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by QDeathstar - 05-29-2014, 12:58 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by tectak - 05-29-2014, 10:32 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-30-2014, 07:21 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by abu nuwas - 05-30-2014, 07:53 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by tectak - 05-31-2014, 01:43 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-31-2014, 03:20 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-30-2014, 08:31 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by tectak - 05-30-2014, 07:13 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-30-2014, 09:58 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by tectak - 05-31-2014, 05:20 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 05-31-2014, 09:22 PM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by QDeathstar - 06-01-2014, 09:08 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 06-01-2014, 10:03 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by QDeathstar - 06-01-2014, 10:26 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by just mercedes - 06-01-2014, 11:05 AM

RE: The Hour of the Wolf - by LorettaYoung - 06-01-2014, 11:33 AM

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