06-01-2014, 05:02 AM 
	
	
	
		You get rid of all the errors and you still have only a message. The poem doesn't say much. And as for what it does say, people aren't blind, their eyes are open, they're awake. They're either ignorant or they don't care very much about what this poem is upset over. And there isn't anything to say about what the poem does say. Its message just says things are not right so look! Look at what?
	
	
	
	

