05-27-2014, 11:58 AM
TE,
Thanks for the comma note, I corrected it w/o a complete new edit.
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"i think you could do much better with a Dylan anti-ode though."
Actually yes, I have written several in that vein. The focus was not meant to be on Dylan in this one, he was simply the vehicle which is one of the reasons I hesitated to make "him" so obvious.
Dale
Thanks for the comma note, I corrected it w/o a complete new edit.
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"i think you could do much better with a Dylan anti-ode though."
Actually yes, I have written several in that vein. The focus was not meant to be on Dylan in this one, he was simply the vehicle which is one of the reasons I hesitated to make "him" so obvious.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.