Guilt

[rowens]

It's a religious poem of guilt. If there's hubris involved I think that's a good quality since I'm writing the bible, and doing it right this time.

[Truerenigma]

So okay, I can read this. Something about it, they way it just carries the reader off into conversation. Feels like talking to someone you once knew. The way you handled the breaks makes for an easy read and the eye doesn't stick, so I started reading at the beginning and made it all the way to the end.