05-25-2014, 08:51 PM
"loosing race": I think you want losing.
As to race/grace, ask yourself why you chose race. Look up the many definitions for grace and see if they work better with your intent. If they do chose grace. If they don't stay with race.
Sometimes, a good suggestion will move you in a new direction you hadn't though of, but its important for that change to better express what you were getting at with the original.
Best,
Todd
As to race/grace, ask yourself why you chose race. Look up the many definitions for grace and see if they work better with your intent. If they do chose grace. If they don't stay with race.
Sometimes, a good suggestion will move you in a new direction you hadn't though of, but its important for that change to better express what you were getting at with the original.
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson