05-23-2014, 11:12 PM
Hi Loretta,
Minor call out:
of the wolf who awaits, for
a fearful weeping place,
The "for" is a weak break it may be better on the second line
of the wolf who awaits,
for a fearful weeping place,
Best,
Todd
Minor call out:
of the wolf who awaits, for
a fearful weeping place,
The "for" is a weak break it may be better on the second line
of the wolf who awaits,
for a fearful weeping place,
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson