The Hour of the Wolf

[LorettaYoung]

Hi Todd: I found most of your suggestion right and made the changes; I can't help loving the irony, at that place, of "dressed to kill". The wolf, or whatever evil, waits for a place, to enter, is my spiritual perspective. In terms of the wolf sucks what, laughing, I do think that could be improved and am thinking about it; I would like to keep that line with a break to. Thanks much Todd, all input is sincerely appreciated, Loretta

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Loretta, choice what you like. I find essence of his soul a bit overwrought but that may just be my personal bias.

Don't feel pushed to rush it let the edit form naturally.

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A man in black repenting of a Kindom lost; would not the soul repeat this theme?