05-22-2014, 06:26 AM
Personally, I find it tough to read centered poems that were not written to be centered. Try aligning it to the left.
I agree with others- this feels like a rap, not a poem, because of the rhyme scheme and the heavy use of slang. The rhyming is too forced, which means it does not allow for creativity.
There is nothing new here. I understand the emotion behind the poem- try and find your own, new and unique way to say it. Be creative!
Good luck.
I agree with others- this feels like a rap, not a poem, because of the rhyme scheme and the heavy use of slang. The rhyming is too forced, which means it does not allow for creativity.
There is nothing new here. I understand the emotion behind the poem- try and find your own, new and unique way to say it. Be creative!
Good luck.
Let's put Rowdy on top of the TV and see which one of us can throw a hat on him first. 
