05-22-2014, 03:04 AM
(05-21-2014, 08:34 AM)rowens Wrote: That's one direction to go, the changes you've made. You should take your time with it, give it awhile, see what you can do. I smoothed out the second stanza in my mind so I know it can be done with only minor changes.
What said "member"?
Hi Rowens: it says member right now on your suggestions. That easy for an expert to say; one direction meaning think of other directions. It say "member" right above, Thanks, more direction, right on it! Do you think I made most of the changes requested? Thanks, Loretta

