The Hour of the Wolf

[rowens]

You could keep the other drafts of the poem, if you still have them. The original poem was still the best model despite the problematic lines. Sometimes you were changing the poem in the original post as I was reading and responding to it, and sometimes you have new versions that nobody sees because you haven't announced with a new post. Not that that matters all that much; it's your poem and you can change it anyway you want.