05-21-2014, 07:21 PM
Brownlie, you got an eek out of me. I hate mieces-to-pieces and rats too. I thought the poem may have stalled on 'My couching scent...', although I like the line. Additionally, the last stanza seems anticlimactic. Perhaps end it with your penultimate one. Otherwise this is as smooth as always. Cheers/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris