An Island -edited

[ChristopherSea]

Marianne, No woman is an island unto themselves and you're getting better, not older darling... I like the poem, but what gives with the reversal, 'daily different'. It reads a bit odd to me (maybe it's just me). Wouldn't your meaning remain the same using 'different daily'? It read similar and carried the same denotation for me. However, I don't know if that throws off your meter. See what you think. Good luck with the edit./Chris