05-18-2014, 03:24 PM
Hi Browlie, thanks for reading and commenting as thoroughly as you have.
the island is meant to represent myself, as I change from day to day... it may not be evident enough. I'll have a think about expanding it - but I was aiming for the metaphor of the 'sea of life' changing me in small ways every day, like the tide changing the shoreline of an island. I may have made it too literal an island with the introduction of driftwood, branch, shell, sand.... they may have to go.
Food for thought, thanks Brownlie.
the island is meant to represent myself, as I change from day to day... it may not be evident enough. I'll have a think about expanding it - but I was aiming for the metaphor of the 'sea of life' changing me in small ways every day, like the tide changing the shoreline of an island. I may have made it too literal an island with the introduction of driftwood, branch, shell, sand.... they may have to go.
Food for thought, thanks Brownlie.