Ronald McDonald's Soliloquy
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Grimace don't do that anymore.

The poem seems fine until the end. The last stanza could be someway better.
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Ronald McDonald's Soliloquy - by Brownlie - 05-18-2014, 12:36 AM
RE: Ronald McDonald's Soliloquy - by rowens - 05-18-2014, 08:38 AM
RE: Ronald McDonald's Soliloquy - by Erthona - 05-19-2014, 10:04 AM
RE: Ronald McDonald's Soliloquy - by Brownlie - 05-19-2014, 03:28 PM



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