05-13-2014, 10:28 PM
This is a bit like a conspiracy theorist's tirade. I recognize and appreciate the connection between Freemasons and America's Forefathers. I suppose the alliteration blitz is for drama in this diatribe, but it is too gimmicky. Hidden agenda or not, they sparked a great nation. I like the closing analogy and coda, but it could have been tied into the rest of the piece better, more than likely, by way of a less divisive poetic body.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris