Ride the Goat.
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This is a bit like a conspiracy theorist's tirade. I recognize and appreciate the connection between Freemasons and America's Forefathers. I suppose the alliteration blitz is for drama in this diatribe, but it is too gimmicky. Hidden agenda or not, they sparked a great nation. I like the closing analogy and coda, but it could have been tied into the rest of the piece better, more than likely, by way of a less divisive poetic body.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Ride the Goat. - by zmeansy - 05-10-2014, 05:45 PM
RE: Ride the Goat. - by ellajam - 05-10-2014, 06:15 PM
RE: Ride the Goat. - by Jinxy - 05-10-2014, 06:36 PM
RE: Ride the Goat. - by Mopkins - 05-10-2014, 07:56 PM
RE: Ride the Goat. - by George - 05-13-2014, 09:33 PM
RE: Ride the Goat. - by ChristopherSea - 05-13-2014, 10:28 PM
RE: Ride the Goat. - by Babeanew - 05-14-2014, 07:17 AM
RE: Ride the Goat. - by Erthona - 05-14-2014, 09:11 AM
RE: Ride the Goat. - by zmeansy - 05-26-2014, 11:56 AM



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