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[SuicidalBlueJay]

I'm loving you in borrowed time,
an opportunity I can't forsake.
And I know the loss will not be mine.
It'll teach your heart how to break.

I'm loving you in stolen years.
And when those years have gone by,
they'll leave you broken and in tears.
They will teach you what it is to cry.

I'm leaving you, you're losing me.
And there is nothing left to say.
Take me home, hold my hand.
I know I'm going, but please... stay.

Hey Lisa I'm Jason! I'm new to poetry, and so far I am finding that the ones with rhyme are my favorite type. It sounds better to me. Prettier (is that a word?). Anyways, your poem is pretty, but one thing I would mention is the last four lines confused me. Because first it talks about leaving but then you want him to stay. Maybe I am just misunderstanding though!!