05-10-2014, 06:15 PM
Hi, zmeansy, welcome.
The Annoying Alliteration made this seem more nonsensical than it is, aside from medicore, what's that?
Although the rest of it makes sense and has some interesting ideas, it comes across as a bit of a rant. I think you could turn the ideas into something worthwhile.
The Annoying Alliteration made this seem more nonsensical than it is, aside from medicore, what's that?
Although the rest of it makes sense and has some interesting ideas, it comes across as a bit of a rant. I think you could turn the ideas into something worthwhile.
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