05-09-2014, 10:38 AM
Oh, i see what you're trying to do haha. That completely went over my head.
If you are talking about city lights, it would be best to use a word instead of "night-lit". Name the other light. Incandescent lights, Christmas lights, neon lights, city lights, headlights. "night-lit" makes people think of "moon-lit"
And no, if the moon doesn't make a sound I wouldn't try that.
The dim glow of the moon
muffled by Christmas lights
If you are talking about city lights, it would be best to use a word instead of "night-lit". Name the other light. Incandescent lights, Christmas lights, neon lights, city lights, headlights. "night-lit" makes people think of "moon-lit"
And no, if the moon doesn't make a sound I wouldn't try that.
The dim glow of the moon
muffled by Christmas lights