In the Night
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*In The Night

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I like the darkness
It falls over me
Like a warm cloud
Seemingly unaware of its mystery
It trespasses upon others,
But enlivens me.
The darkness refuses to speak,
But insists on enveloping me.
I kick, I scream, I laugh, I cry,
And am renewed by the night.

The first stanza has some wordy parts.



I like the darkness
For I am alone in my thoughts
And the night is my canvas
With endless possibilities.
Every night the stars may sparkle,
And the stars may fade,
The moon may shine
And the moon may wane
But the night remains,
A portal to the universe.


The second stanza, as a whole, seems a bit mawkish.
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In the Night - by Gestalt222 - 04-23-2014, 07:33 AM
RE: In the Night - by rowens - 04-23-2014, 07:56 AM
RE: In the Night - by RiverNotch - 04-27-2014, 08:11 PM
RE: In the Night - by Gestalt222 - 04-30-2014, 01:12 AM
RE: In the Night - by ralex003 - 04-28-2014, 12:42 AM
RE: In the Night - by zahrakh - 09-09-2014, 08:10 PM
RE: In the Night - by Mwaba don - 09-11-2014, 07:34 AM
RE: In the Night - by Lysander Gray - 10-04-2014, 01:21 PM
RE: In the Night - by billy - 10-04-2014, 04:24 PM
RE: In the Night - by Quotidia - 10-05-2014, 04:41 PM
RE: In the Night - by noname - 11-10-2014, 12:10 PM
RE: In the Night - by azure - 11-13-2014, 11:46 PM
RE: In the Night - by paranoid marvin - 11-14-2014, 05:50 AM



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