The Autumn Wind -edited

[TheDoctorCam]

I really enjoyed this poem, short, but good. With the first read, I understood it fairly well but I understood it much more once the "Scorpio curious" line was explained by you. I'm just not very big into astrology so maybe it is just me. However, I feel that if you just add one or two more words to explain the temperament of Scorpio's, it will come across better for both readers who either do or do not know astrology. Something as simple as "Scorpio's curious desire" would make me understand it more.

I don't know if it is intended or not, but punctuate/capitalize consistently throughout. I was confused here, is it supposed to be

throws the pieces to the ground;
touches the naked twigs ,
embraces branches bending,
with the onslaught of his love.

Lastly, the second from last line, "embraces branches bending", reads a bit harsh. Just something I noticed.