Two Eggs

[Robert9614]

I also didn't get the sex allusion on the first few readings so maybe something could be done to clarify that. Although it's possible to chalk it up to me being dense

Forgive me if I'm wrong, but curdled eggs are bad, right? So were you trying to convey something going wrong "in the heat of the moment" that caused them to curdle? Maybe adding something about what went wrong (if that's what you meant) could help.

I really like the simplicity of this though. There's a real warmth to the tone of the poem, which perfectly reflects both the cooking of eggs and intimate sex. The short lines also excellently emphasise the simple sex you were going for here.

Good job!