04-22-2014, 02:06 AM
Mary,
Thanks, I'm not good at writing dialogue, especial Scottish as this is suppose to be. It is simply a bit of a spoof on Tom, who while he has been touring Scotland will often sign his name as Tam, which of course is how they would pronounce "Tom" in the land o' Nessie.
kindofahippy
You are right of course, but I'm a terrible one for good form, if there's an authoritarian rock I will rebel against it (Captain Hooks the fellow for you), and in this instance I thought it was fairly obvious who was talking and choose to ignore putting names on it, especially as only one person has a name, and putting "other guy" just seemed a bit odd. Blame the Stream of Consciousness writers."
Well I'm off to the lighthouse so I can pierce this heart of darkness (I can't understand a word of what Brando says, it very frustrating!)
Dae MacDae of the clan MacDae.
Thanks, I'm not good at writing dialogue, especial Scottish as this is suppose to be. It is simply a bit of a spoof on Tom, who while he has been touring Scotland will often sign his name as Tam, which of course is how they would pronounce "Tom" in the land o' Nessie.
kindofahippy
You are right of course, but I'm a terrible one for good form, if there's an authoritarian rock I will rebel against it (Captain Hooks the fellow for you), and in this instance I thought it was fairly obvious who was talking and choose to ignore putting names on it, especially as only one person has a name, and putting "other guy" just seemed a bit odd. Blame the Stream of Consciousness writers."
Well I'm off to the lighthouse so I can pierce this heart of darkness (I can't understand a word of what Brando says, it very frustrating!)Dae MacDae of the clan MacDae.
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.