Lost in the Money
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Seems like you loose your focus, and you over personification of objects seems more a distraction than a help, such as "narcissistic stereo systems". For me at least that doesn't really work, neither does "Indignant Maytag washing machines".

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Lost in the Money - by kidadel - 04-20-2014, 11:52 AM
RE: Lost in the Money - by Erthona - 04-20-2014, 05:44 PM
RE: Lost in the Money - by ellajam - 04-20-2014, 08:24 PM
RE: Lost in the Money - by George - 04-22-2014, 08:32 AM



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