04-19-2014, 12:05 PM
"the water still falls in through the gaping frames" What gaping frames are you referring to?
In terms of "style" I have no problems if one chooses to deviate from standard grammar and punctuation as long as one has a justifiable rational for doing so, and can state that coherently, otherwise I assume it is mere affectation and one is doing so because they are under the misapprehension that it make4s what they write "look" more poetic. Appealing to faddishness (that is to say, only doing it because it is the style) in an art form whose main purpose is to revel the truth seems sadly misguided, as well as contradictory.
Best,
Dale
In terms of "style" I have no problems if one chooses to deviate from standard grammar and punctuation as long as one has a justifiable rational for doing so, and can state that coherently, otherwise I assume it is mere affectation and one is doing so because they are under the misapprehension that it make4s what they write "look" more poetic. Appealing to faddishness (that is to say, only doing it because it is the style) in an art form whose main purpose is to revel the truth seems sadly misguided, as well as contradictory.
Best,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.