True Love
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Very good! But why do you use "we are" in the last line? I think personalizing works much better than generalizing here. For example thinking of humanity's insignificance compared to the Universe is not that breathtaking than thinking of one specific person and how small and insignificant he is.

"it is the great I Am and without it I am not"

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True Love - by Jae Mc Donnell - 02-14-2014, 08:53 AM
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