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First limerick attempt

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04-08-2014, 12:42 AM

(04-08-2014, 12:38 AM)Erthona Wrote: There's nothing like a limerick, and this is nothing like one

Dale

I shortened it up a bit, do you think it reads closer to one now?

*Warning: blatant tomfoolery above this line

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First limerick attempt - by kindofahippy - 04-07-2014, 11:34 PM

RE: First limerick attempt (Obscene content) - by Mopkins - 04-08-2014, 12:11 AM

RE: First limerick attempt (Obscene content) - by ChristopherSea - 04-08-2014, 12:23 AM

RE: First limerick attempt (Obscene content) - by tectak - 04-08-2014, 12:37 AM

RE: First limerick attempt (Obscene content) - by Erthona - 04-08-2014, 12:38 AM

RE: First limerick attempt (Obscene content) - by kindofahippy - 04-08-2014, 12:42 AM

RE: First limerick attempt - by tectak - 04-08-2014, 01:34 AM

RE: First limerick attempt - by Erthona - 04-08-2014, 01:55 AM

RE: First limerick attempt - by milo - 04-08-2014, 02:23 AM

RE: First limerick attempt - by tectak - 04-08-2014, 04:07 AM

RE: First limerick attempt - by kindofahippy - 04-08-2014, 02:19 AM

RE: First limerick attempt - by ChristopherSea - 04-08-2014, 04:19 AM

RE: First limerick attempt - by Erthona - 04-08-2014, 04:25 AM

RE: First limerick attempt - by milo - 04-08-2014, 04:46 AM

RE: First limerick attempt - by ChristopherSea - 04-08-2014, 04:46 AM

RE: First limerick attempt - by Demon™ - 04-08-2014, 07:37 PM

RE: First limerick attempt - by Am I A Poet? - 04-18-2014, 08:36 AM

RE: First limerick attempt - by Brownlie - 04-18-2014, 08:59 AM

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