04-02-2014, 03:07 AM
Dale,
I felt as if the narrator is lying to me. The words are ferocious and cutting and seem to want to sound even more harsh and bitter than they already are. The tone is even darker than the letter but even before the ending, I felt as if I was coming to the conclusion that narrator is her fool and always will be.
It is very clever of you to have written a piece that conveys its meaning through the forcefulness of its bluff-- IF that is what you intended . . . I have to keep in mind that I may have it all wrong.
I felt as if the narrator is lying to me. The words are ferocious and cutting and seem to want to sound even more harsh and bitter than they already are. The tone is even darker than the letter but even before the ending, I felt as if I was coming to the conclusion that narrator is her fool and always will be.
It is very clever of you to have written a piece that conveys its meaning through the forcefulness of its bluff-- IF that is what you intended . . . I have to keep in mind that I may have it all wrong.