04-01-2014, 11:43 AM
(03-31-2014, 05:32 PM)ruxdogtor Wrote: I'm flying high on memories[/b] Over all I liked it. The first two lines gave good imagery, (which I like). "Mold into what's around you" kinda seemed out of place for me, but most likely i'm being stupid. Keep posting, love to see more
My dreams glow with bright color
The ones of you and not the others
Our past rings in my heart.
You grow then move
While stagnation is my life
You find the groove
Like the edge is to the knife.
Longing for your warmth
I see that I am drowning
Mold into what's around you
My love needs to go forth.
