< hungry fish > (evoku)

[rayheinrich]

Ray, this did not work for me. The wording format left no "movement" in the poem.
I could not grasp where the poem wanted to take me.
The connection of the 3 lines is tenuous, I can try to work out what is going on, but when I do it does not quite add up.

Thank you. JG

Fish need legs to better eat beach crabs.
OR:
An evolutionary route for fish to evolve legs is possible
because these crabs spend some of their time on land and
some in water. This means that fish that can get just a tiny
amount more out of water than the rest will get a tiny amount
more to eat. This even gradation is what makes it possible for
the process of 'natural selection' to work.