03-27-2014, 09:51 PM
For me it's still that journey from sweet to sour that jars - the picture of the kid so likeable, yet the narrator is so harsh and judgmental about the parents - and only really offers materialist/superficial reasons for why they are bad parents.
I like that 'reclaim' picks up on 'repossessed', but I wonder if filled or littered would work better than 'emptied'.
I like that 'reclaim' picks up on 'repossessed', but I wonder if filled or littered would work better than 'emptied'.

