The Kids Ain't Alright (Formerly Scoop Him Up) edit #2.1
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For me it's still that journey from sweet to sour that jars - the picture of the kid so likeable, yet the narrator is so harsh and judgmental about the parents - and only really offers materialist/superficial reasons for why they are bad parents.

I like that 'reclaim' picks up on 'repossessed', but I wonder if filled or littered would work better than 'emptied'.
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RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by Erthona - 03-02-2014, 05:05 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by ellajam - 03-02-2014, 05:12 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by justcloudy - 03-02-2014, 05:16 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by ellajam - 03-02-2014, 05:48 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by jeremyyoung - 03-02-2014, 07:41 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by ellajam - 03-02-2014, 08:01 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by jeremyyoung - 03-02-2014, 08:08 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by ellajam - 03-02-2014, 09:51 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by Erthona - 03-02-2014, 10:48 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by ellajam - 03-02-2014, 12:24 PM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by cidermaid - 03-03-2014, 05:16 PM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by ellajam - 03-03-2014, 09:39 PM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by ChristopherSea - 03-03-2014, 09:20 PM
RE: The Kids Ain't Alright (Formerly Scoop Him Up) edit #2 - by jeremyyoung - 03-27-2014, 09:51 PM
RE: The Kids Ain't Alright (Formerly Scoop Him Up) edit #2.1 - by Ui Domhnaill - 04-06-2014, 12:23 AM



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