03-27-2014, 08:17 PM
Well, I've taken another swing at this one. Thanks again for the help, each comment was considered, and reconsidered 
, I hope I've done justice to the insight you all shared.
Title change again, and I'm still not right with it. I've tried to be a bit less nasty, hopefully the edge has moved but not disappeared. I hope you all will let me know if I'm headed in the right direction or if I've slaughtered the poor thing.
, I hope I've done justice to the insight you all shared.Title change again, and I'm still not right with it. I've tried to be a bit less nasty, hopefully the edge has moved but not disappeared. I hope you all will let me know if I'm headed in the right direction or if I've slaughtered the poor thing.
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