03-23-2014, 08:54 PM
Hi Rowens,
I actually like this one a lot. I'm not a fan of the title and some of the punctuation choices you made are causing me some grief; but i like the wistful sentiment and the tone of uncertainty and image of the one way street of this love I get from this. Kinda makes me sad - it reminds me of Forrest Gump talking about His Jenny. (I meant that as a compliment - I like Forrest Gump)
I actually like this one a lot. I'm not a fan of the title and some of the punctuation choices you made are causing me some grief; but i like the wistful sentiment and the tone of uncertainty and image of the one way street of this love I get from this. Kinda makes me sad - it reminds me of Forrest Gump talking about His Jenny. (I meant that as a compliment - I like Forrest Gump)