The Hare

[chrisgas]

To end his reign as they should

It can’t come too soon


Any lines that feel like pointless interjections.

Thank you Rowens, I will go away and try and rework it.

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hi chris, a suggestion would be to strip anything away anything you've said in another way. look out for cliche, it's almost always your enemy.
you can swear on this site so no need for ###
if it's coursing i'm not sure there would be seats and if it at the track it would be a real hare.

Billy, thanks for your comments, read, read, read!! My homework!nI do have problems understanding syntax and structure in language, I am either a bit thick or possibly slightly dyslexic (probably the former) so I don't know how far I can improve.
Then I'll try and rework it!
The hare was coursing and I was thinking of a "seat on a stick" or a stone wall, obviously not a row of seats.