Evolution

[tectak]

Hello Tom,
First impressions -I'm likeing this a lot. But a couple of the lines are causing me some trouble, but only on my second read through so plenty of time yet.
First though must say how much i love line 1 and the four line in St 3. They are just wonderful - i find myself repeating them just for the pleasure of the sound and the fun of it.

But line 2 just leaves me cold. It feels odd and the actual meaning is strained. Perhaps it is just my read, but i want a commar after right.

I am still reading and processing this so might be back with more.

Meanwhile, I'm not sure how you will feel about this suggestion in terms of meaning, but I keep reading turns the ear into tunes the ear.

All the best AJ.

Hi AJ,
Yes to that comma. It is just lateral inversion. "Sinister" is "left"or "left handed" (from the latin)so left is right...the eye connects to the brain left to right but we "see" everything the correct way round. It is an evolutionary quirk of "seeing". That is all.
Best,
tectak
PS I still think you may be right about the comma