03-18-2014, 08:54 PM
(03-18-2014, 08:29 PM)crabboy Wrote: Hello I am new to these forums and i am looking for some constructive criticisms on one of my first Haiku's:Crabboy, you should post your poem as a new thread in this forum for proper attention.
The air is empty
the motorway congested
who recalls the bee
what do you think?
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris