Trinity of Existence

[John Galt]

Hello Izo, I see this poem as "cutting your teeth" so to speak, which direction you head from here will be interesting. Your poem is mostly abstract, (see the exerpts below). All the rest is in the same vein, what does this mean for me, the reader? it means that your poem does not touch me on any level; there is no concrete imagery to let my mind form a mental picture, my senses are not engaged and so I cannot enter the poem at all. It is almost meaningless. I say that with respect.

"To see without seeing, to feel without feeling"
"To embrace the Pine cone but not yet the final Ocean"

"Only by Stone may We perish"
"By keeping in Mind will We survive"

Thank you... JG