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I'm not entirely sure of the scene. At times, I was envisioning visiting a grave, though the present tense in stanza 4 doesn't quite mesh. Other times, it felt more like a case of infidelity and an estranged couple.

I hope some of these thoughts may help you. Thanks for the read,

-geoff

Your comments definitely help me see what is missing from the visual I'm trying to convey. I try to avoid being too cryptic but I'm starting to think it happens anyway because mentally I'm filling in the gaps I've yet to have written.

Thank you for your thoughts, geoff!