03-03-2014, 09:20 PM
Ella, you have gotten quite a bit of advice on how to clarify the piece, but I wanted to share the chords this struck with me. That opener could represent an anxious child or pet awaiting parents or master return, respectively. It's quite effective and could be either one, if is wasn't for that smile. You made it clear that the parents are too young to deal with a child. It brought back an old memory. One girlfriend of mine was raised by her grandparents because her mother did not want to marry the father nor miss the opportunity to go away to college. This common story fits your scenario, as we are left to wonder who is watching the child as they parents flee. I also thought of a kid left home alone as the parents go to the casino or work. I want to scoop them all up! You have a very specific story in mind, so good luck bringing it to fruition.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris