03-02-2014, 09:51 AM
Jeremy, I was thinking about the rhyme comment as I wasn't putting them in, maybe I will. 
Dale,
I was hoping "too young" would do double duty, child and parents. I was undecided on the quotation marks, do you think they threw it off?
I've been looking for the conflict with the last stanza, I don't see it, could you pinpoint it for me?
Dale,
I was hoping "too young" would do double duty, child and parents. I was undecided on the quotation marks, do you think they threw it off?
I've been looking for the conflict with the last stanza, I don't see it, could you pinpoint it for me?
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