The Kids Ain't Alright (Formerly Scoop Him Up) edit #2.1
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Mar cello,

I like this idea, but I am uncertain what
"too young for this", "his parents cry
about themselves," are they feeling self pity. are they the ones too young? It seems to conflict with the next stanza.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by Erthona - 03-02-2014, 05:05 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by ellajam - 03-02-2014, 05:12 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by justcloudy - 03-02-2014, 05:16 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by ellajam - 03-02-2014, 05:48 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by jeremyyoung - 03-02-2014, 07:41 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by ellajam - 03-02-2014, 08:01 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by jeremyyoung - 03-02-2014, 08:08 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by ellajam - 03-02-2014, 09:51 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by Erthona - 03-02-2014, 10:48 AM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by ellajam - 03-02-2014, 12:24 PM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by cidermaid - 03-03-2014, 05:16 PM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by ellajam - 03-03-2014, 09:39 PM
RE: (I want to) Scoop Him Up - by ChristopherSea - 03-03-2014, 09:20 PM
RE: The Kids Ain't Alright (Formerly Scoop Him Up) edit #2.1 - by Ui Domhnaill - 04-06-2014, 12:23 AM



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