02-21-2014, 10:11 AM
Mikeodial,
If you put "Orgasm" as the title this makes perfect sense, otherwise I have a difficult time understanding what you are are talking about.
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"our unique moment for body and soul,"
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since you are talking about this from your perspective it seems it should be
"a unique moment for body and soul,"
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"Bathed with intention of love and commitment,"
How can one be bathed with intention?
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Seems like "I AM made." would work better as "I am reborn".
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Dale
If you put "Orgasm" as the title this makes perfect sense, otherwise I have a difficult time understanding what you are are talking about.
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"our unique moment for body and soul,"
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since you are talking about this from your perspective it seems it should be
"a unique moment for body and soul,"
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"Bathed with intention of love and commitment,"
How can one be bathed with intention?
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Seems like "I AM made." would work better as "I am reborn".
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Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.