02-11-2014, 02:48 PM
I probably have a thing against rhymes, so I am biased. But here they seem a little forced. And it reads like Coolio in the 90s.
I'll be there in a minute.
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Better Raw the Taste of Vision (a short poem) - by alatos - 02-11-2014, 12:14 AM
RE: Better Raw the Taste of Vision (a short poem) - by newsclippings - 02-11-2014, 02:48 PM
RE: Better Raw the Taste of Vision (a short poem) - by visualcondyle - 02-13-2014, 02:51 AM
RE: Better Raw the Taste of Vision (a short poem) - by Blunt - 02-13-2014, 03:47 AM
RE: Better Raw the Taste of Vision (a short poem) - by Erthona - 02-13-2014, 04:45 AM
RE: Better Raw the Taste of Vision (a short poem) - by TheWall0912 - 02-15-2014, 04:54 AM
RE: Better Raw the Taste of Vision (a short poem) - by alatos - 02-17-2014, 08:26 AM
RE: Better Raw the Taste of Vision (a short poem) - by just mercedes - 02-17-2014, 08:41 AM
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