02-08-2014, 01:21 AM
tec your sound (and deserving) thrashing was invaluable while rewriting this. And billy with the rewrite I tried to take a third person stance, as you suggested. Just wanted to say thanks again to both of you.
Take a look at the new one here, http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=13446. Any more thoughts will be appreciated as always.
-justcloudy
Take a look at the new one here, http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=13446. Any more thoughts will be appreciated as always.
-justcloudy
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.